

I was not quite impressed with my earlier proposals to my client Abubaker who wanted a small logo to put it on his photography business card, website and probably as a watermark.
My client Abubaker wanted a small logo to put it on his photography business card, website and probably as a watermark.
This being my first venture to do commercial branding, i am quite critical to get it right. Placed here is the logo, watermark and a potential concept for a website header (done in colors with photographs taken by client embedded).
The concept is still in its primitive stage, I would love to get your feedback on any possible scope for improvement as i this being my first venture, i want to get it right.
I came up with the idea of using a camera dial with the icons representing the photography my client specializes in i.e Kids, portrait and street. He felt he would also require a sample with the letter “a” in the dial. (I am not quite sure if sample 2 resembles a dial by any case)
I would love to get your feedback on any/all possible scopes for improvement as i this being my first venture, i want to get it right.
Thanks.
@amazwi