
Hello Graham (and all the other eyeballs),
First off, I would like to say thank you for taking time out of your schedule to help others better their work and their skills – it’s truly refreshing in today’s world!
I’m running late for work, so I will try and keep this brief. Your submission form is blocked by the firewall at my place of work, so I have to do this from home (which is probably best anyway).
Ok, enough with the chatter. This is the last iteration of the logo that both the client and I are happy with, but I would like to tweak it for maximum impact. Actually, the logo looks nice and corporate like, but it is really for a creative company that will support just about any “positive” production (music, art, book publishing, cartoon, 3D animation, ect).
I rounded the inside corners of the boxes to highlight the “plus” and to make it look a little less “hey, anyone could do that…” and to give it some interest. I also rounded the corners on the capital “P” in both Positive and Productions. The “S” is slightly modified as well. If you are interested, the font is Bitstream Vera Sans Bold. I started working with 144pt font size but intend to scale it back to a more manageable size for the actual logo.
What are your thoughts on the location of the negative space plus? Should it be like the first one in the screenshot, the third (it seems too closed to me), or something like the last one?
Any tips, hints, or improvements would be appreciated!
Thanks,
Steve