Tamara Kauffman Logo Update

Jim reminded me about The Logo Clinic when I posted my Tamara Kauffman logo on Posterous yesterday. No idea why I didn’t take advantage of my own clinic.

So anyway, I was bowled over with the amount of comments on my previous post ‘http://imjustcreative.posterous.com/looking-for-some-logo-feedback”.

If you are knew to this project, please check the link above as this has the history for the project thus far.

So I read the comments left yesterday and on Twitter and took onboard, and have come up with this revision. Here is a side by side comparison of the original original logo. http://cl.ly/24381b231320a02d4ddb/content  

Changes include altering the door position and style. Added some subtle details to the door frame. Added a door knob and some room perspective tweaks.

Here’s an example with window : http://cl.ly/fe23a9c6089cbd7ba63e

And in colour minus door knob : http://cl.ly/89ce48477ce3b9a18be5

My concern is that it now looks too ‘ordinary’ and my aim with this project was to create something ‘curious’. But like I said before, I am so close to this logo now, I am almost blind to it. So can’t really make an accurate call on the sort of first impressions that are important.   What say you?