The Logo Clinic (Hello Graham, here’s the logo of “bleepolar” my...)

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1 year ago

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Hello Graham, here’s the logo of “bleepolar” my visual identity for music and also graphics.

Bleepolar is a wordplay with the words “bleep” and “polar”, bleep is for the short and hi noise and polar because i love the opposites and contrasts, it also reflects some of that bipolarity i use in the creative fields i’m working.

However i feel that my typeface does not reflect so good the main ideas i want to show, i want to keep it simple and bold because my music and my design is that way.

I think i need more strenght in the type, i need something to be really clean and recognizable at any size in case i need to put it on large or small formats.

Let me know your thoughts and thanks in advance for all the help.

Also thanks for this great idea of The Logo Clinic, i just discovered your blog and some of your work i couple weeks ago and i got really inspired, you have a new fan :)

Big up from Colombia!

- Luis

pd: here’s the link for the CS4 file just in case: http://www.sendspace.com/file/sftlgv