The Logo Clinic (Triniti)

Walk in with a logo design you need some help with – walk out with a fresh perspective.

The Logo Clinic is free, but as this is a side project for me (Graham Smith), I can't promise replies will be immediately forthcoming.

Please bear in mind, some of the advice will be of a personal nature, so anything I suggest should be taken with a pinch of salt.

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1 year ago

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Triniti

Hi Graham,

First off, what do you think of the overall logo? It is for a local cover band which is made up of three female singers.

Now to my question…I am just looking for some professional input on a minor adjustment to the type choice. I am currently using Palatino font and wanted to know what you thought about curving the tail on the letter R. The first example is the original Palatino font, second is a minor curve and the third is a major curve. Do you think its needed at all?

Also, what do you think about this font choice? I really like how is compliments the thick to thin strokes on the logo, I did also try gotham light but this type just stood out more, do you have any more suggestions on the font itself?

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